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Dark (I'm So Sick)

I am darkness
A devils guard
I am sickness
Body discard

I am weakness
To your vicious terms
I am pain
For your pleasure evermore
I'm so sick

I'm So Sick

I am cruelty
the one you hate
I am passion
the sex u create

I am sin
a demons desire
I'm destruction
No more future
I'm so sick

I'm So Sick

I am wretched
Depression inside
I am dead
Walking this earth all alone

Nobody's home
I am nothing
Nothing at all
I'm so sick.

I'm So Sick.

Author notes

A song I wrote Entitled, "Dark (I'm So Sick)".

Every artist goes through harsh times.

If you want to hear my music,
You can visit:
www.myspace.com/natepredmoremusic

Nate.

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Comments


  • weird.quiet.girl
    July 31
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    wow, i love this...reminded me of one of my "i'm so sick" pieces.lol
  • kales4
    July 17

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    Thank you for entering my contest. I loved that you rhymed this poem so well, and it didnt soun d forced at all. Great write and good luck

  • Defeated-n-Gifted
    July 9
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    wow... I like the wording in this. best of luck in the contest.