My ribcage implodes from the pressure of her soldiers. Spiked heels and heart rates remind me of what I was scared of.
Author notes
Nevermind. Try to feel hyperventilation.
A contest entry
- make me feel something. by aanika.
1003 points, ended July 20, 2008, 25 entries
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Comments
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i really like this, in a weird, weird way.
it's almost dirty pretty,
but not.
well done

