Whispers come from nature...
The wind rustling leaves amongst the trees.
Whispers come in telling secrets...
So others may not hear your words.
Whispers too come in echoes of the night...
Thunder, raging storms and lightning
And the screching of birds and owls!
What echoes or whispers do you hear?
Another whisper is God talking to us...
Do we listen to his counsel?
The latter is the greatest echo of all
Like looking into a miorors reflection...
His whispers say to everyone...
I love you and will help you if I can!
So let him in your heart
and
Your life will never be lacking anyting!
dragonheart1
A contest entry
- Options!! My first contest so give me all you've got :) by Ally.
380 points, ended July 6, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The last part of this poem speaks out in such truth. I really like this- he would not speak, but whisper. Guiding- hinting, but not ordering.
admittedly, you have not entirely fulfilled the option criteria- you have only picked one out of the word bank.
however, it is a good write. Good luck!
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This poem is perfect,full with faith and romantic in the same time(I mean the first 7 lines) I enjoyed reading your poem.
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