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Will He Come Back?


I trace my skin
with the barest of touches,
only a few minutes pass
from when he touched me.

{leaving me in little light
with no answer to my question}

Will he help me get through,
to blossom into someone new?


Author notes

Picture Prompt - Delicate Thoughts by ~yana182
Under 50 words - 8 Lines

A contest entry

What to do in an insane world?

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  • Liquid Robot
    July 18

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    Fits the contest perfectly. Love the shortness :] (and the way you added the middle stanza in brackets - I love brackets in poems)

    Good luck :]

  • Amazira
    July 5

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    Butterflies are free

    from thoughts such as these. Unfortunately, poets have to express these ideas in a way that is personal to us. Creative concept that might do well in this contest. Good Luck!

  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    July 5

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    this is a beautiful write and the words chosen really do make the reader feel as if they are reading a delicate thought. well done

  • Ephiphany silver member
    July 5

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    Loved it.

    Great job. I loved the words used in this piece.
    Thanks for sharing, and good luck to you.

    -ephiphany


  • Once Upon A Mind
    July 4

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    Of course!! Great write, and take on the picture, you really took the "feelings" into account... Such a sense of yearning for renewal Thank you for entering such a lovely piece
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