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Knots

All knots on the inside.
My stomach would kill me
if it had the chance.
Tying knots upon knots
on 'why not's.
Heart beating
so hard it hurts;
probably could kill me
if I gave it the chance.
No longer in control


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  • fellow worker
    September 10, 2008

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    hum. sounds like high anxiety. i suppose that that might not be the case but... I can still relate. i used to feel crazy out of control.

  • Salt Therapy
    July 5, 2008
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    Wow... this is intense, I really like it. Hope you are well. ~ Kerri