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I'll be your teddy bear

I'll be your teddy bear,
You can hug me
When you're upset.
I'll never leave you alone.

Share your deepest secrets with me,
You know I cannot say a word to anyone.

Punch and kick me
when you need to vent anger,
I cannot feel physical pain.

Cuddle me when you sleep,
I'll be there to fight off your nightmares.

I'll be here for you,
If you let me be.
I'll never leave,
If you don't throw me away.
I'll comfort you forever,
If you keep me, you're teddy bear,
close to your heart.

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I wish I could be my Mums teddy bear..

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  • CharcoalScreams
    July 6, 2008
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    Thanks hun x


  • Poetic Obscenity
    July 6, 2008

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    Aw

    That's really adorable. Everyone needs a teddy bear and it shows what a wonderful person you are when you can be someone's teddy bear.
    I'm sure you could do great things as your mothers teddy bear.
    -hugs-
    Wonderful write. It was cute.


  • Lonely Christina
    July 5, 2008
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    awwwwww! love u cutie


  • Fallen-Phases
    July 4, 2008
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    lovely poem!
    really meaningful and it flows really well