Deep into the depths of the forest,
dark, lonely, were are they, my friends.
Lost too? Alone? Gone? Will I see them agian? When I look up nothing but darkness is above me, not even stars.
Is it night or day, I can't tell.
A light, no a trail, should i follow if its my only chance to survial? Yes
Wait a movement, a meadow, or heaven? Did I die, no. I made it I'm not it heaven but on earth... home again.
A contest entry
- Lost Yourself, Find Yourself by dreamersalwayslive.
735 points, ended July 30, 2008, 20 entries
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Comments
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very nice... a little odd, though =P
what's with the banana splits!? >.< -
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Haha it was for a contest that made me include banana splits... D:
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i like it!
It does have a nice flow, and I love your take on lost and found! I think you truly captured your emotions here, and told a interesting story along with them.
And, I love your author notes!
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