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Diana's Poesy

i sat enclosed a vapid chapel
popping pills to hasten ends
when in my hand death's card was placed
i then beheld her glowing grace

my body bound for her blessings
wended its way deep in her garden
amidst her lush seclusion she sang
songs that bear hunterss' hearts

feral goddess, lusty patron
keeper of my savage soul

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  • MoonsShadow gold member
    July 4

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    clearly written

    penning a poem of such vision is clearly painted for us to share, thank you for this entry, good luck in this contest.
    Lin