Ultimate goal is heaven,
spiritually renew.
Yet, would gladly sell
the devil my soul
to rot in hell with you...
Author notes
rakeman rocks
prompt: Heaven is found in knowing your love for me,
But the experience of it is beyond even that.
20 words
In a list
A contest entry
- One of those quickie contests you may have heard about 10-20-30 by Cerulean.
475 points, ended July 4, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Something Short that rhymes by Piccola.
600 points, ended August 14, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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OH OH OH. I love this piece so much! you might want to read a longer piece that I did ...
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3436314 (if you want)
I love this though its wonderful. -
WOW! i am in love with this piece... so hot... go you!!!
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Yeah -
very nicely penned. love in
one of it's many forms. now, i
have the exact feelings! -
Yep! that's love alright! Well done and best of luck to you.
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Excellent take on the prompt!
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