Tonight fireworks crackle across the sky,
light up the night without fear or apology
celebrate the day my country
demanded its destiny
And through the excitement
my thoughts turn to you
and the way i feel
when your eyes meet mine
Fireworks baby, fireworks
Author notes
It's cheesy but aren't all happy love poems? Prompt: fireworks
A contest entry
- I'm Bored prompt quickie by crazymomma.
450 points, ended July 4, 2008, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What does this make you feel? Anything too repetitive?
Comments
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we all wish for fire works with the ones we love 
Good poem
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Awwwww, how very sweet and sappy, just like the two of you! You make my teeth hurt! Just kidding, this really is sweet though. It's o.k. that it's cheesy, it suits you.
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A fireworks lady, living with country music all around; sounds troublesome. --- Great poem congratulations (thank you).
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Love is never cheesy. I still see "fireworks" with my Luis. I like the way this is almost 2 poems in one. Patriotic and love in one. I enjoyed the imagery very much. The first line was my fav
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