An explosion of my feelings
Built from deep within awaiting the fire
The life it would receive to destroy or create
I want to scream...just react!
But that sets it off sooner
Here I am trapped...pleaing the truth
I didn't lie but you won't believe me
Will the seeking truth cause the explosion?
Or will the overpowering lies fuel the ticking bomb?
It goes off but with great silence...
Its many colours revealing my thoughts
What a beauty to see...
My pain mixed together forming my explosive lights
A tear somehow escaped!
My tear is the only reaction to my hidden colours...
A contest entry
- I'm Bored prompt quickie by crazymomma.
450 points, ended July 4, 2008, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow that was deep! I am so sorry if you are in pain. Try to remember some things aren't always as bad as they seem. Take it easy.
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I like the direction you went with this. I really hope it is not personal because the pain seemed so real. I really enjoyed the metaphores used. Thanks for entering
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