Sorry but I think I haven't lost my touch...
I know on me you still have a little crush...
It's easily seen in your face as you blush.
I always carry you with me deep inside...
In my life you are my personal guide...
You are a love that can't be ever denied.
You are my desire and my lust...
I can't help loving you I just must...
Doesn't matter if everything ends up in a bust.
You always heal all my deepest scars...
Right here in this very room where we are...
It's over crowded with raining stars!
Look how beautiful and brightly they fall...
As they bounce on the ground and off the walls...
The day I met you is all they make me recall.
They are dropping all over us in the room...
Never stop falling as they contently resume...
I was made for you and you for me is what I assume.
If you ask me why they come to view...
It's because you make me feel alive and new...
They appear all because of you.
I wish to steal you away somewhere very far...
Somewhere no one will find and won't look bizarre...
Can't you see how it's raining stars?!
I would like to know if you feel the same...
Is there inside of you an desire burning flame...
Tell me if my heart you would like to proclaim.
You know that I have a very shy side...
But these feeling I just can't hide...
It's just that you are my joy and pride.
I try to count to ten but only reach four...
If you don't hold me I'll faint on the floor...
I always end up loving you more and more.
Yes dear right now it's raining stars...
You surpass even the very average par...
I'm letting you know now with the help of my guitar.
A contest entry
- Welcome :]] by Iloveugh.
450 points, ended July 6, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Little daughter of mine... Shelly you are not awesome... YOU ARE EXTREMELY AWESOME! Wish your daddy luck little princess..!
Comments
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aww this is really sweet and beautiful!
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Thanks!!!
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Woah, does commenting you on this even have a point?
Fifty hundred people already commented this poem, but it's seriously a pretty good one.
It made me feel very easy inside.
I dig the idea of raining stars.
It's beautiful.
and that is from the heart.
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Thanks, that's offly kind of you to say. Read more of mine if you like!
Love you a lot, a lot!
Stay cool, and Rock-N-Rule!
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beautiful this is my favorite so far..WAY TO GO!!
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Oh... You have so many to go with me... And will end up with so many favs!
*LOL!*
Love you too hun!
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Very Sweet!
The title by itself was lovely and refreshing "You always heal all my deepest scars...Right here in this very room where we are.....like that thought of healing!
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You know me dear lovez...
The "inventive" type!
(^.^)
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This is lovely
A very good write and such depth for this love you show for the one your heart yens for . Keep up the good work
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Will do, over!
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Great i liked this alot. And i am not That awesome gowd.. This poem was very well written. My favorite part was when you said "Yes dear right now it's raining stars...
You surpass even the very average par...
I'm letting you know now with the help of my guitar." Thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck :] And sorry if you dont like this color hehee..
Shelly
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It's all good!
Stay cool and Rock-N-Rule!
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AWW
this is such a lovely write... a beautiful dedication! emotions ran deep and imagery stood out! all in all, this was yet another stunning piece by you!
oh my god, i love your las stanza, it blew me away! gorgeous! 
keep penning! love ya!
AWESOME!
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Thank you dear Beauty!
I do my best!
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this is a beautiful darling,
i miss you
lots the poem is just adorable,
i know many women could fall in love with you and have,
all my love,
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Sorry dear, my MSN is acting up!
And my only guarantee...
Is your love with me!
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thank you my dear <3
i hope im your only one
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