The wind blows,
The leaves fall,
It begins, Autumn...
Animals take shelter,
Snow falls, and everything is quiet.
When spring comes the life comes back.
The forest awakens.
A contest entry
- nature in the forest by misticmoonlite.
600 points, ended July 18, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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intense. short, sweet, memorable, meaningful.
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for something so short, it's really quite beautiful: simple and sweet. it got me thinking about walking down a suburban street on an october afternoon.
you do have one spelling error (leafs should be leaves); the punctuation is a little awkward, which makes it hard to find the tone of your poem. -
Awww very nicely written
I love Autumn, it's when my birthday (where I live) falls in so it's all good ^^
Great write and good luck in your contest!
Claire x -
Good i liked this alot very well written
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Thanks
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short but sweet. hehe. very nice, carrey. luv ya
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lovely
the picture of the seasons surely paint a clear portrait of beauty in all seasons, love this,thank you for this entry, good luck
Lin
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Thank you
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