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Humanistic Expression (edited)

He drew his intentions

with sounds of my soul

behind broken pinky-swears and creative roadblocks

 

in and of

a creation formed from  indifference

 

wrapped around concepts  

of what we really are

 

...a blue moment of weakness

 

affection

when rhythm

tastes instinct

 

…totally unable to breathe

 

 

 

 

 

7/4/08

Happy 4th of July! 

Author notes

Prompt: ( 5 ) He drew his intentions with...

Thank You Lady Lane for the inspiring quotes...HUGS

Note: The title of this poem is credited to Faithbound (Trina). The title is actually a prompt from one of her contests. Go Check her out and read some of her poetry...you won't be disappointed. And while you are there, enter her contests...they are very inspiring.

A contest entry

Take a moment to breathe it all in...

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Comments

  • VeritasLiberte
    July 22, 2008

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    INHALATION!!!! Ah, yes! There it is! I catch yet another glimpse of Becky's creative genius with this write, and I think, REFRESHING! Nicely done my lovely friend!


  • Pure Thought silver member
    July 7, 2008
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    MMmmmmm don't stop now this is great.


  • Danny Beatty gold member
    July 7, 2008

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    I love this ...

    ...a blue moment of weakness
    affection
    when rhythm
    tastes instinct
    …totally unable to breathe

    I was going to make a longer comment on this but it sort of speaks for itself, i have to go find someone to make love to ... yer fault ...

    i love this

    Moqui go now


  • adsaige
    July 4, 2008

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    this is a very nice poem, i think.
    there is just something there that
    i have to give you credit, appeals
    to me alot...and i absolutely love
    Faithbound. She's a doll!