The heart aflame
from divine torch
radiant with sun's purest shine,
meant to end darkness in the mind,
dimmed by those
who feared the light
would burn instead of guide.
Author notes
30 words
prompt- "The very brightest candle of all has been extinguished
Smothered by those who could not bear to face reality"~Feint by Epica (a song)
A contest entry
- quickie ten spots by Hope Angel.
450 points, ended July 6, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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What a take on this prompt! This is amazing! I love the images this painted for me, without any pictures being here! Great job!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Oh My~
Powerful piece done in 30 words to grab the reader
Excellent take on the prompt~
Love the words: divine torch
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweetness
Best wishes too
and my Love & Light
~ Desire~*~
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Beautiful. Nice take on the prompt. Thanks for entering.
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Wow, truly amazing. I loved the whole poem. Short and sweet, what I enoy a whole lot when it comes to other people's poetry at points haha Very nice job. Loved it, keep on writing.
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Love the Brilliance!!!
Best of luck in this contest!!!
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