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Torches

The heart aflame

from divine torch

radiant with sun's purest shine,

meant to end darkness in the mind,

dimmed by those

who feared the light

would burn instead of guide.

Author notes

30 words
prompt- "The very brightest candle of all has been extinguished
Smothered by those who could not bear to face reality"~Feint by Epica (a song)

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  • sunshinegirl
    July 5

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    What a take on this prompt! This is amazing! I love the images this painted for me, without any pictures being here! Great job!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Desire gold member
    July 5

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    Oh My~

    Powerful piece done in 30 words to grab the reader
    Excellent take on the prompt~

    Love the words: divine torch

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweetness
    Best wishes too
    and my Love & Light~ Desire~*~


  • Hope Angel
    July 5
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    Beautiful. Nice take on the prompt. Thanks for entering.

  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 4

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    Wow, truly amazing. I loved the whole poem. Short and sweet, what I enoy a whole lot when it comes to other people's poetry at points haha Very nice job. Loved it, keep on writing.


  • Rose of Ireland gold member
    July 4
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    Love the Brilliance!!!

    Best of luck in this contest!!!

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