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My Georgia Peach (TWO) (Harrisham Sonnet)

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My Georgia Peach (TWO)…(Harrisham Sonnet) 

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Who is this mysterious Georgia peach I long for with love,

over and over we make love, as sweet wine intoxicates the mind.

Reeling from the passion, yet peaceful my belove,

gasps of wanton desires only dreamed of by mankind.

Surely she cannot be real, but a vision from above,

yearning for her touch, her taste our bodies entwined.

                                              ♥

Her words flow through my body, imprisoning my heart,

ravenous as I drink of her desires, which fuels the fire.

Shy as she appears, yet her lust she cannot depart,

yielding to her body she thrusts higher and higher,

gigantically erupting as a volcano rips apart.

Yet, who is this woman I must have, with every fiber of my desire?

                                               ♥

This Venus of many faces and beautiful words, she graces,

she is sweet nectar of mystery, for my endless, embraces.

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Author notes

By ~ Maxboy ~~ Harrisham Sonnet
Image By ~ photobucket
Background ~ My Sweet Georgia Peach ~ By ~ Riftkin

"We loved with a love that was more than love."~ Edgar Allan Poe

..........Contest~Option~Recorded Version of Song [♥♥]


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  • paw-writer silver member
    October 8
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    This is a nice sensual poem,done very tastefully. You have used some lovely imagery here. Nice job,and thanks so much for entering my contest. Blessings, Patty


    • Maxboy gold member
      October 8
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      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed it.

      Don

  • whispernthedark silver member
    September 20

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    Wonderful poem, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.

    ♥
    whisper

    • Maxboy gold member
      September 20
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      Thank You so much for the wonderful comment.

      ♥
      Don

  • Little Feather Greeters member
    September 20
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    This one

    needs adjusting

  • delightfulmess gold member
    September 18

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    Awe... What a beautiful peice of romanatic poetry
    SO enjoyed this read. Thank you for entering my contest.



    Delila

    • Maxboy gold member
      September 19
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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment.

      Don

  • mysticstorm gold member
    September 15

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    Beautiful! I like this better then the 1st and it was wonderful...you paint a picture of a woman whom is every man's desire...very well done!
    :


    • Maxboy gold member
      September 15
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      Thank you for the applause and beautiful comment.

      Love
      Don

  • unavailable
    September 10

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    I liked one a lot too.

    • Maxboy gold member
      September 10
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      Thank you for the wonderful comments.♥

      I hope you enjoy the series.
      Don

  • whispernthedark silver member
    September 7
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    This is a nice series you have going. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.

    ♥
    whisper

  • xReesexBaileyx
    September 6

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    great...

    erotic/sensualistic... but not surreal... Thanks so much for the beautiful piece though!


    T.F.R.B.


    • Maxboy gold member
      September 8
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      Thank you very much for the comment and applause.

      Don

  • Lowercase Prelude gold member
    September 2
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    very nice
    this was a beautiful sonnet

    • Maxboy gold member
      September 2
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      Thank you very much for the wonderful comment.

      Don

  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    August 27

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    It was so nice to read the second part of the sonnet, it is such a lovely piece, to have such a dedication, sublime, well done and best to you

    • Maxboy gold member
      August 28
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      Thank you so much for the wonderful comment.

      Thanks Again
      Don

  • LadyDementia gold member
    August 26

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    A stunning sensual piece, very softly done. A smooth read, thanks for entering and good luck
  • coddledsoul
    August 24
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    Hmmm a decent entry! best of luck in the contest


  • PrInCeSs AnAsTaCiA
    August 24
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    thanks for your entry good luck

  • Swan song gold member
    August 23
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    Wow you are truly smitten and this is a very fine poem

    • Maxboy gold member
      August 23
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      Yes I am, and thank you for your very nice comment.

      Don

  • Margaret Denham
    August 23

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    I applaud your ability to write sonnets; a form I'm unfortunately not comfortable writing myself. You conveyed your thoughts well.

    Thank you for entering and best wishes in the judging.

    Love Margaret


    • Maxboy gold member
      August 23
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      Thank you for your wonderful comment and applause. I am pleased you enjoyed my sonnet.

      I do have to admit, this form of sonnet is the only form I can grasp. All other forms leave me in the dark.

      Thanks Again
      Love
      Don
  • eightball666
    August 21

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    As good, if not better than the first one! Very good my friend, and good luck.


  • Karl Weiss - Topaz gold member
    August 12
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    A fine piece of work, thank you for this wonderful entry in this contest.


    • Maxboy gold member
      August 12
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      Thank you for your wonderful comment and applause.

      Don

  • Yunalonei
    August 11

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    Good

    This piece was good but so cliche which is why i am hard to impress with love poems.
    Good luck in the contest

  • crivanea
    August 5

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    beautiful poem..i love reading form poetry..because i personally suck at them..lol..nice job..and good luck in the contest
  • Poetryintheblood
    August 4

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    Thank you for your beautiful submittal, good luck in my contest, Josie

    • Maxboy gold member
      August 9
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      Josie
      Thank you so much for the Honorable Mention, I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem. You have made me very happy.

      Thank you for puting on the contest.
      Don

    • Maxboy gold member
      August 4
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      Thank you very much for your comment.

      Don

  • Poetic Obscenity
    July 29

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    Okay

    So, This is definitly a thrilling 2nd piece. Wonderfully beautiful.
    Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.

  • crazymomma
    July 26

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    I don't know why but this is my favorite of the 3. I really enjoyed the gentle flow of the words and the imagery created here. Thanks for entering and good luck

    • Maxboy gold member
      July 27
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      Thank you so much for the Bronze Trophy, I am so happy you enjoyed my poem. You have made my weekend.

      Thanks Again
      Don

    • Maxboy gold member
      July 26
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      Thank you very much for the applause and comment. I am finding most women are enjoying number two over one and three. I may have to study number two more closely as I write number four.

      Thanks Again

  • BeautifulMourning
    July 26

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    Although 5this might not be about heart break... it is heart breaking to read, because I know what it is liketo have love like this. How real it is. More than lovely.

    • Maxboy gold member
      July 26
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      Thank you for the very nice comment, I am happy you liked it. Would it help if I told you in the end, his heart was ripped from his body and stompt on??? No, I won't tell you that, because as of yet, this story has no end.

  • Luckintheshadows
    July 25

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    ooooh...this is just SUCH a romantic poem...maybe I'm strange, but that's how I see it. Your words flow so beautifully, your imagery is superb - really well written, clearly defined.
    Thanks for sharing this, and taking the time to enter my contest,

    Luck.

    • Maxboy gold member
      July 25
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      Thank you for the wonderful comment. No, I do not think you are strange, that is how I hoped it would be taken by others.

      Thank You
      Don

  • Weetzie bat
    July 25
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    delicious...kinda like peaches^^
    thank you for entering

  • xwarriorXprincessx
    July 24

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    mmmmmmmmm lucious

    absolutely love the passion flowing out like... "endless rain into a paper cup" to quote the beatles ever so descretely.

    in all honesty though, this poem succeeded in two things, it made me crave something i can't have right now thanks to the fact that my peach is M.I.A. at the moment, and two it made me melt with its beauty and sensuality.

    if only there could be more loves such as this, so compassionate, tender, warm. so... innocent, but not. something so simple as just love and yet, so much deeper.

    nicely done. best of luck.

    • Maxboy gold member
      July 24
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      Thank you for the ever so beautiful comment. Maybe you should enter your comment. That was very well said.

      Thanks Again

  • papercutangel86
    July 24
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    good entery thanks for entering it

  • sensualbutterfly
    July 22

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    WOW! I was glad to see that you kept the same picture..Sensual is the word that comes to mind. Thanks for the entry

  • Rakerman1 silver member
    July 22
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    Although this is very beautiful and full of love, I could never seem to get the hang of the flow.


    • Maxboy gold member
      July 22
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      Thank you for the comment, applause and your consideration.

  • Lowercase Prelude gold member
    July 21

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    sensual, visual, lovely
    you have all of this here

    this Georgia peach sounds like quit the woman

    • Maxboy gold member
      July 21
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      Thank you so much for the positive comment. I am happy you liked it.

  • whos my humblepie
    July 19

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    yahooooo-ooo.....
    I liked this one better than the first....
    Makes me think of my sweets and what I'd love to do with him.
    hhhhhhhh.......


    • Maxboy gold member
      July 20
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      Yahooooo-ooo....

      Thank you so much for the Silver Trophy. I am so excited, please ask your sweets, to give you a big hug for me.
      You have made my day.

      Thanks Again

    • Maxboy gold member
      July 19
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      Thank you so much for the applause and the oh so nice comment.

  • Immortal Obscurity silver member
    July 19

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    This is lovely... Obviously, it's not my form, so I don't feel I'm qualified to comment on technicalities. But as far as the content goes, it's lovely and tender, sensual without being smutty, which is a rarity nowadays. Well done, and good luck in the contest.

    Laura x


    • Maxboy gold member
      July 19
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      Thank you very much, I am happy you enjoyed my poem. Thanks also for the applause.

  • Harrisham Minhas
    July 8

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    You have beautifully crafted the words to express your admiration for your Georgia peach.
    You have used the Harrisham Sonnet form correctly.


    • Maxboy gold member
      July 8
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      Thank you very much for the applause and comment. I really enjoy working with the form you have created.
      Thanks Again

  • X-Queen-Georgia-X silver member
    July 8

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    glad you entered the contest great write makes me feel special


    • Maxboy gold member
      July 8
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      HAHA I couldn't resist, same name and all. Thank you for the applause and comment. With that name, you surely are special.

  • Maxboy gold member
    July 7
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    < To PurringKitten

    I am very disapointed you felt the pressure to remove your wonderful comments on your poems from me.

    Thank you so much for your beatiful comments, they are always sweet as a Georgia peach.

  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    July 6
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    Fiery write
    Thank you for your entry
    Have a good time

  • PoeticLove
    July 6

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    OH BOY!!!

    Max, this one was even nastier(that is, more sensual) than the first one. You go boy, loved it, full of desire and passion. YAY for my bud, Max. poetic love, D.xx


    • Maxboy gold member
      July 6
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      hahaha!! Thank you very much friend. The one thing us old guys are very good at "Thinking Young". hahahaha
      Glad you liked it. Hmmm that didn't sound right.
      Thanks
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