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Cruises

Each gaze a tempest sea

bleeding with ache

in passion's passage secrets.

 

Glancing hiding sail of heart's schooner

ever seeking one

that will take it

to love's harbor.

 

Author notes

28 words
"My eyes are an ocean in which my dreams are reflected."
Anna M. Uhlich

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  • AliceinPoetryLand Moderators member
    July 6

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    Just beautiful, loving and sensual too.
    Congratulations on the well deserved trophy
    Gaylene


  • Rose of Ireland gold member
    July 4
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    Awesome!!!

    Good luck, Poet!!!


  • Carolina Moon silver member
    July 4
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    Awwww this is so wonderful! Good luck to you sir!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 4
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    Beautifully stated! *sigh*
    The imagery flows through so well! Thank you!


  • sunshinegirl
    July 4

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    What a wonderful job on this one! I love that line,

    "ever seeking one
    that will take it
    to love's harbor."

    That is just perfect...

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Sailor Ptolema gold member
    July 4

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    oh i like this....a poem with a gentle sea

    how serene and divine!!

    ~all the best in the contest!!!

    S.P.

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