Sun light
Though the branches
Crunching twigs beneath feet
Breeze rambled about the tree tops
Forest
Tall oak trees reached the sky above
Dropping acorns to sprout
Seedlings growing
New life
Author notes
Picture by Moonshadow
In a list
A contest entry
- nature in the forest by misticmoonlite.
600 points, ended July 18, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Merry meet,
Congratulations on winning the Bronze. This was a tough contest with lots of good entries and I was glad that I was not judging.
I love the short form that you used. It gives more impact with what your trying to get across. I also love the acorn.
Once again, Congartulations on winning the Bronze.
Amythest
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I do believe the picture painted with your words is even more relaxing and beautiful than the pic itself. This is some wonderful imagery. The flow was nice. Good luck in the contest with this very well written poem.
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I can imagine myself walking through a forest when I read this. Good Luck.
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very pretty
I love the imingery you posted as it is so true to this part of the country,I also thank you for reconizing me as the photographer...I wish you good luck in this contest...
Lin
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