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Words

Words are falling
Rolling
Tumbling, off my tongue

Words are calling
Whispering
Speaking, from my soul

Luminescent images
Love, joy, glee
Murmuring softly
Fast evading me

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Words are telling
Deceiving
Revealing, when said aloud

Words are compelling
Commanding
Riveting, any who hear

Disappearing images
Fire, Hate, Compassion
Slipping away in
Annoying fashion

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  • Miss Chievous
    November 25, 2008
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    That was wonderful!nice flow
    Good Luck!


  • FaeryMouse
    October 1, 2008
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    This has great flow to it...Once again thanks for sharing your words

  • raymondsgirl8708
    September 10, 2008
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    great write, wonderful use of words. thank you for entering


  • edens-envy
    August 12, 2008
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    I love the rhythm to this it has a great beat. There seems to be a very slight hint of irony in this piece too, I rather enjoyed it.

  • piccola silver member
    August 3, 2008
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    I have a poem entitled, "words" much the same idea...


  • JustsimplyKatiee.
    August 2, 2008
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    good luck babe.

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