fading
caress of wings,
gliding close to fire’s light
as fatal flicker draws it close,
dreams die
with final breath as flutters hope
past spiraling cosmos,
as solo flight
expires
Author notes
butterfly cinquain
In a list
A contest entry
- quickie ten spots by Hope Angel.
450 points, ended July 6, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is beautiful. I loved how it is about a butterfly and you used form.
Nice take on the promt and thanks for entering. 
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I think I need to take classes on form poetry. This is so lovely. Juls
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