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Solo Flight

fading
caress of wings,
gliding close to fire’s light
as fatal flicker draws it close,
dreams die
with final breath as flutters hope
past spiraling cosmos,
as solo flight
expires

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butterfly cinquain

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  • Hope Angel
    July 6

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    This is beautiful. I loved how it is about a butterfly and you used form. Nice take on the promt and thanks for entering.

  • fortyninereasons silver member
    July 5

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    I think I need to take classes on form poetry. This is so lovely. Juls