A fallen feather
Charming in simplicity and yet
An instructive, sorrowful vignette
It flutters in the gentle wind
Up and down, a lazy spin
Slender stem and tiny frills
Warded from rain and winter’s chill
A line of perfect symmetry
It slipped away and drifted free
Though once it soared through open skies
Forgotten, lonely, now it lies
A fallen feather
Author notes
MeNoEmo - Ladybug lands on lee
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Comments
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That was wonderful! I like the ryhme!
Good Luck! -
Simple and to the point ...loved it
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To describe a falling feather in lovely details- new for me to read and very much glad to read
This is a lovely write and can give a distinct scene to the reader's mind and all ^^
Nothing else to say other than the ending being quite weak to give an impact to the reader; still, this is really a lovely piece
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Wonderful image that the reader can easily envision.
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good luck.
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WOW
This poem is very nice, after I read the rest of the entrys there might be some points headed your way. The poem was great and very creative. Thanks for the entry. -
woah it's wow very nice
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Wow... so simple but full of sad and sorrowful emotions... Definitely a very good write... nice rhyme and a smooth, easy flow...
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Very good
This poem is touching; and your subject is not the same as so many others.
Thank you for sharing
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