Gate of knowledge,
philosophical legend,
Bravery incomparable,
Lone warrior of Uhud,
his justice-
eye opener,
patience unimaginible,
Mohammed's standard bearer,
Social service,
one can only think of.
Assasinated
while prostrating.
Author notes
total words- 30.
i have described H.Ali in this poem, who was the brightest candle of his era when he was assasinated, while praying in the mosque. All his qualities i have tried to explain thru this poem though the word restriction made it difficult to me.
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A contest entry
- quickie ten spots by Hope Angel.
450 points, ended July 6, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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A poem well worthy of the throphy.
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i couldnt have a found a better candle.. yes ten words were too less but you did it a true heart it measure for the missing words.
congrats for the bronze..
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well worth your trophy. its wonderful.
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Great Work!
Your deep love for such a sacred personality like Hazrat Ali Murtaza reveals the blessings of Almighty God upon you.. I am really moved by your wonderful work.. Carry on respected Aaliya Abbass!!
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This is amazing! I'll agree with Vernal Bloom. The name itself holds is so great! This piece is a winner, indeed! Thank you for sharing this.
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It reminds me of a quote' how dangerous it is to be good' good people are threat to society..so society expels them..right from Socrates, holy Mohamud, Mahatma Gandhi..Your poem is true sister..one that teaches.
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yes society cant stand good people. but one correction- if u dont mind, prophet mohammed (pbuh) has died a natural death. he was not assasinated. u can include mohammed's grandsons here instead, coz both of them were killed mercilessly.
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Praiseworthy indeed!!!
The title of the poem led me to open it! And I am more than happy to know this is actually in the praise of Maula Ali!
I deeply appreciate your effort in penning down this beautiful and heartfelt verse in the praise of the Mushkil-Kusha.
May Allah-the Almighty bless you always,
Keep shining,
P.S. I extend my gratitude on your kind comment on one of my poems.
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thanx for the comment n ur gratitude. Aun introduced me to ur poems by sending ur url. i would love to befriend u.
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A real piece of art!!!
This is such a short and well described poem. So little yet so great. You know my Bajjo is here who has an art of such expression, she can write a whole universe in such small volume.
Marvelous, beautiful Art, I love it.
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thanx for appreciating my poem. i am glad u comparedme with ur bajjo. convey my salam to her.
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I'm Shia so you know how much the word Ali a.s makes me feel proud. And this a very nice poem you composed for him. Afarin,Aliya!
~Masoomeh~
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thanx for appreciating my poem.
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Wonderful write dear..so loved this....Full of knowledge...
Congrats on the bronze!
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thanx
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Unique and wonderful take on the prompt. It is funny that, the song the prompt was taken from is about an assatation. Thanks for entering.
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thanx for thr trophy n appreciating my poem as well.
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