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Kryptonite

Missing image
Kryptonite

eve of  destruction

swirling debris

in the wind

which is

Kryptonite

which

took you in?





immersed

drowned

dig around

hold high your

kryptonite

as

flames higher

higher

higher





Burn





Kryptonite





which is yours?

what can you not

live with out?



that is


killing

you

my

friend?
















































Author notes

This was my version...

A contest entry

picture was found on a free fairy site.

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Comments

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  • celadia
    July 19
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    Another magical piece.

  • parenchma
    July 8
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    Wow. pick one?

  • Once Upon A Mind
    July 7

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    AMAZING! There's not much else to say, you've created something Marvelous for the Kryptonite topic - Best of luck


  • Fantasy dream
    July 6
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    You entered your own contest?

    • Once Upon A Mind
      July 7
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      Oh lol, didn't realize when I'd commented that it was surely enough, the hosts write! WOW! Still a wonderful write!

    • Rheea gold member
      July 6
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      Sure I did. Of course it will not be in the judging.
      This is for all of us to talk to each other and be friends.

  • Melissa Burns
    July 5

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    I like this contest, and this poem It's so interesting to try and image what everyone's 'secret' weakness is. I don't know if I'll have anything decent to enter but I may try


  • arafura
    July 5
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    Yes we all have our own particular kryptonite! Mine's a secret!

  • Michael P
    July 4
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    excellent Rheea speaks volumes of eveyone-food for thoughts my friend

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