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Gone

You took my hand

you showed me how

You promised me it'd be alright

I trusted you

stayed with you

I'd wait for you to make the fight

but when you left

i lost myself

I made my heart heal itself

i forced my soul to leave you back

But i couldn't convince myself of the fact

that you'd left me again for her again

Though you said you'd be around

I will never again beleive that sound

of your heavy boots on the ground.

I hear you all the time

wanting me, calling my name

But here is where I draw the line

no more calls and no more pain.




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  • sassykitty
    July 6, 2008
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    This is so sad. The pain of the unrequited love literally burns through the words, I can so relate to the situation you describe. Your use of language is deceptively simple yet so effective and you really do communicate the feelings of the poetic voice with empathy and emotively. Great write.