Bring your shadow over here
so I can inhale it.
I want you to flow thru my body
so I can feel your pain.
Then together we can fall into
the melted pot of madness
and dance across the naked moon,
waiting for the sun to rise.
The darkness will fall away
and once again we will be strangers.
Author notes
8. Bring your shadow over here.
A contest entry
- It Begins With... by Dalaney.
825 points, ended July 7, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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My pain is contained
in the darkness of my heart.
I keep from others while I dance
with the words of life
sharing with you
so we never become strangers.
I like your write, much better than my response.
Buddy

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Thank you for your comment, I really appreciate it
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very nice
i have to say i liked this and i realy loved the the imegry of the hevans



