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[ Bring your shadow over here ]

Bring your shadow over here
so I can inhale it.
I want you to flow thru my body
so I can feel your pain.
Then together we can fall into
the melted pot of madness
and dance across the naked moon,
waiting for the sun to rise.
The darkness will fall away
and once again we will be strangers.

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8. Bring your shadow over here.

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  • Pure Thought silver member
    July 4, 2008

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    My pain is contained
    in the darkness of my heart.
    I keep from others while I dance
    with the words of life
    sharing with you
    so we never become strangers.

    I like your write, much better than my response.
    Buddy


  • Anewangel
    July 4, 2008
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    Thank you for your comment, I really appreciate it


  • downed lover
    July 4, 2008
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    very nice

    i have to say i liked this and i realy loved the the imegry of the hevans