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Lines So Deep

I'm writing lines so near
cos maybe I'm not you
can you feel this to
as I rhyme my life so true

can you still propell
while the world all thought you fell
come and live my shit
then tell me it's not hell

can you see me here
standing all alone
and I still don't give a fuck
if the world don't like my tone

cos I told you I was back
to define my every line
times in lines of crimes
as I comeback rhyming fine

you people cannot touch
as I pen this shit so slick
this shits like a race
and I'm thinking far to quick

I will stand by every word
as I give the world my mind
as I dig in lines so deep
this world may never find

Please tell me what you think

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  • Kastor
    August 9
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    This was fun too


  • dustookie2
    July 4, 2008

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    OH yah you do stand by what you say give a voice as you stand proud. Penning in words of no frills telling it straight from the heart...behind the lines lay the heart of someone who cares a man who is prepared to make a stand and try to improve the world.The magic and power of a street poet is to relate to the people down walking the . This my friend you do making no apologies nor should you. Keep true to you Paul and if it is just one person who stops and listens to you on the corner it has to be good.