If by chance
I tap into the Divine
and partake
Of that sweet wine…
And for a moment
I feel the all-
Consuming love
That is yours and mine…
The rest of my concerns
Seem so mundane…
As I drift through
Life’s waxes and wanes
A contest entry
- you are here... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 12, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Less is more...
So much said in so few words...
Great narrative, rhythm & flow...
Intriguing rhyme scheme & word choices make for a compelling & uplifting write...
I love it...
Well done!!!
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yes..this is what the life is..you did a factual task..well done..and my thanks for the impressive entry in my contest....
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THIS IS VERY SWEET!!!!!
To find this kind of love is what we all pray for so much!
's I do hope it finds its way to you.
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