Her life touched so many
between the lines
words convey pain and sorrow.
Happiness seemed to be hers,
until the day came
candle melted too fast
light was extinguished early…
Author notes
prompt- "The very brightest candle of all has been extinguished
Smothered by those who could not bear to face reality"~Feint by Epica (a song)
A contest entry
- quickie ten spots by Hope Angel.
450 points, ended July 6, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Beautiful take on the prompt. It's very saddening and I can relate to this. Watching someone fade away and become lost is very painful. Thanks for entering
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