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unknown reasons

you continue to forever hurt me
saying all these painful, nasty things
making me cry and lose sleep
wishing I knew a way out
but still I can't leave you

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    July 9, 2008
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    Sometimes I wonder if its can't or won't - and I say this as a person that was indeed there once.