He drew his intentions
like a drunken artist
whose coloured palette
looked more liked
a melted popsicle
that was thrown on the floor
by some spoiled brat
who stamped his feet for attention.
Terry Carroll
any feed back is always helpful
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Cleverly penned, Terry..I remember temper tantrums with my son. Your analogy about the drunken artist makes for a humoured write!


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Thank you once again
Many thanks once again for reading my work. I do treasure your comments and your time.
TC
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