The thing that will bring me to my knees,
Is the sight and smell of cottage cheese,
I would never even eat a tad,
there's no way of telling if it went bad,
It truly is a culinary curse,
It can't go bad, it can Just get worse.
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Well done. Serious subject, jaunty poem. Logical, truthful subject. Good luck.
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haha, ain't that the truth! There are few things that I won't eat, but you found one of them. Fun read!
Rory
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Anti Cottage Cheese Eaters of the World, Arise!!!
Ah Rory, Great minds think alike.
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Dear God, I though I was the only one who hated cottage cheese! Good luck in the contest!
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Ok... Cottage Cheese it isn't! Lol, creative, and VERY different idea - Nice
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Hmmm cottage cheese - truly something to groan about! Nice poem/entry! I am going to enter this if I can think of anything semi-decent to write!
good luck!
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so true so funny got me in stitches
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i have long thought of cottage cheese in this way. its nice to know that im not a lone lol. you did a good job with this. i really liked your rhyming, it gave the poem a sort of disgruntled yet whimsical quality.
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Del
I was wondering what your Achilles Heel was!LOL
Good luck in this contest and Happy 4th of July!
Regards,
John
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