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Loving Countenance

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In breath love’s brought to bear
Blessings freely given
With grace heart’s faith will sing
Songs of eternity
Unto your soul I pledge
Peace and security
With courage I submit
To make you my desire

My delight to serve you

See to your happiness

My being craves embrace
Bonds beyond the tactile

Take me into your soul
Soar with me in the clouds
Comfort me with stories
I shall soothe all your doubts
Make darkness become light
My love, you possess me
To satiate your life
In loving countenance

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

The Elf Proncess, just having received an engagement ring from a Wizard, recites her vow of betrothal. This makes them married, thought the formality of the wedding celebration still waits. The ring is a crystal orb that glows. It floats in between diamonds with no apparent attachment to the setting.

Composed as a string of connected himistichs of 6 syllables containing 2 strongly stessed accents, using alliteration to connect the last accent of one line to the first accent of the next. This makes any two consecutive lines equivalent to a 12 syllable stich. In most lines there are alliterations with unaccented syllables as well. This is the verse used by the storytellers of old in Germanic languages such as German and English.

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  • myrataal silver member
    July 6
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    Your poems are so beautiful and soft ....

    I think you are in love.

    Blessed be.
    Myra


  • PoeticLove
    July 6
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    Beautiful elfen poem, I hear they are very difficult,

    Fantastic read, good luck in the contest.
  • this is very beautiful. i love it. "make darkness become light" my favorite part.
  • ouch this makes me jump jump jump yayyy i cant believe i read this like 4 times and i wanna read more more more its splendido


  • Amera gold member
    July 5

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    This is so lovely, it’s a love poem that is filled with passionate devotion and it makes me swoon. The use of himistichs makes this poem flow like the soft passion the elf has wizard. I’m goung to bookmark this.

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • Well I am not sure what your author notes mean,

    BUT I love the read! Alot!! One can feel the peaceful feelings that comes from this one! Great job my friend!!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

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