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sunrise.

black tea brewed against dawn


  when the red sun shone






peeking weary eyes over the horizon.




    and out in the garden



between the trees
  beneath the ivy



      we sat
  together.




and drank our tea black

    infused with sky





and whispered clouds










    at the sunrise.

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  • Tortured Poet
    July 4, 2008
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    pretty


  • Matthew-Simpson
    July 4, 2008

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    my new favorite

    I really enjoyed this. It reminded me of so many things in my life. You painted the picture of many of my memories. Well written.