figuring it out is too beautiful
(whole self communion with myself in the middle)
luminosity of day to day expectancy,
light beside shadows
trying to come together -
a spectrum waits
Author notes
Prompt => "5 o'clock in the morning"
A contest entry
- 30 Words by Dalaney.
600 points, ended July 6, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I liked this poem a lot. I like the way you describe 5 in the morning. That is the thinking time of the morning. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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I do like the different approach you took on the prompt - very creative. thank you so much. love, lane
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I love your take on the prompt and your last line is so beautifully positive.
All the best with this
gaylene
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