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This one's for me.

I promised you a poem.
I couldn't write a single line,
of words that were happy, not sad.
So i decided yours would have to wait.
This one's for me,
a way to vent,
a way to get away.
I wanted to write you a poem.
I couldn't find the right coloured pen,
only blue and black, no red.
So again, it has to wait.
Because this one's for me.

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  • fangs to blame
    October 6, 2008
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    I love it


  • alivefromlove
    July 15, 2008

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    i really like this poem! too many times have i wanted to pen happy things, but all that would show up on my page would be emo stuff. great write =)


  • Beauty Of Silence
    July 7, 2008

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    ooh

    i like this, it was interesting... pretty innovative and creative! i can relate to this too... sometimes you just cant come up with the right things to say or write... anyhoo, keep penning!

    short.simple.stunning


  • going nowhere
    July 6, 2008

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    i like it... there are so many times that i want to write for someone, but the right words just dont seem to come... i like how you incorporated your thoughts and the ideas you used...


    • CoveredInTheBlood
      July 7, 2008
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      Ya, and it really sucks because I have all these happy thoughts in my head, and I like this girl, and she asked me for a poem, but I can't write happy. Thanks for the comment!

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