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Alone

Alone I sit...

Unsure what caused this rift in my world
My soul tattered, broken, and beyond repair.
Tears form but pride won't let them fall.
Ashamed I sit alone.

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    July 9, 2008
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    I can understand the sentiment but I would have loved to see a bit more wow in the words.