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In Deepest Parts of the Night



I think about you in deepest parts of the night.
I admit you have been the main part of my dreams.
Your vision floods into me like crystal clear streams.
even though a ghost I feel you holding me tight.
Your illusion felt deep it could be a nightmare.
Instead your touch to me is a welcome relief.
I am delving desperately into this weak belief
but you are more than a dream with your sweet care.
Are these the workings of a very lonely heart
planting illusions deep into my lost mind?
As my soul exists with realities unkind
and you a lovely ghost who would never depart.
In my deepest dreams my sweetest passion flows
and in untouched places my deepest desire grows.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Jeff

    Well done on this beauty, congratulations on your shiny cup. Excellent sonnet. ~Pamela


  • paulcreates silver member
    July 10

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    I love the unique take on the prompt and relish thinking outside the box. I feel this one could benefit from more capitalization and internal punctuation in order to smooth it out a bit more. Overall a good poem though.
    Thank you for entering!
    Paul
  • In my deepest dreams my sweetest passion flows
    and in untouched places my deepest desire grows.... my favorite lines. Juls