Who are you?
No mystery even though we have never looked
into each other's eyes
but both are searching for the others' hearts
The night flew like the eagles I watched in the sun
Daring truths
Touching notes
Lengthy and not so lengthy messages
Neither knows what we'll ever get from this.
Who are you?
Author notes
Someone I discovered..and hours from me..Up til 4:30am chatting on the computer with him last night..Interesting. Don't know where it will take me. Made me loopy but was worth it.
Comments
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I am impressed by this Tammy! Sound like you had quite the night. THANKS!!
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It's true sometimes you can meet someone online (specially through AP) and you can talk to them for hours chatting about poetry...and then you being to learn about each others lives. Sometimes we just wonder who the hell they are, really.
Simple structure more of a reflection. I like the first line and the last as it sums up everything in between. Good write! 7/10! -
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Well..the person wasn't from AP..should be interesting if we ever meet. We have talked about that too...hmm..he made me reflect a lot. Thanks
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