i
blast
off with
a countdown
from ten, to one
you cant hold me
back. detonation
is my middle
name.
..
whenever i feel
pain, i fly away, no
need for me to face it.
soar above all reality,
rejection of society,
ignore it from my
vantage point in
the clouds. the
sun shines bright on
my glossy exterior ,never
quite reaching my heart. pointed
caps cover my eyes, but I still burn
brightly in the end.
.
watch out for fires
in the sky, when you look
for the stars at night
.
for I am up there
singing with the
planets. i am
a rocket
alone
free
3
2
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Author notes
Form poetry in the shape of a rocket...
A contest entry
- Shape poetry any theme you like any topic by Entwining Beauty.
300 points, ended July 22, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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thats is really cool. Nice use of words and cool way to write em.
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