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Without a fear.

Words can't explain,

How beautifully your smile shone,

And now that your gone,

How beautifully it still shines, and never ceases in my mind.

 

Your life taken,

By a man unknown,

Your beauty,

Oh, how it shone.

 

Now, your in heaven,

Looking down below,

Smiling ear to ear,

Now your up there, without a fear.

 

 

 

July 4th, 2008.

 

 

Your 1 year anniversary.

 

I'll see you in heaven, Griz.

 

 

 

 

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  • oikevois baby silver member
    1 day ago
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    Beautiful my darling sister. I'm so proud of you for being so strong. You are truly one in a million.

    Love,
    Mylee

  • Rose of Ireland gold member
    July 28
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    A beautiful memorial, yet so very sad...

    I'm sure Griz knows how much she was loved in her lifetime, and is still loved, even beyond. "Without a Fear" is a very heart-and-soul-felt poem, and a wonderful tribute to the lady, your friend. I felt the love shining through. Take care xx Peace, Cyn


  • HeavensDaughter
    July 28

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    Wow...what a touching tribute! It is always sad to read about something like this, yet you present it with such positiveness!

    Well written!

  • Wrinkling Mind silver member
    July 6

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    This is beautifully heart-breaking. You allow the reader to really revel in your loss and pain, well done.

  • ears2hearyou gold member
    July 5

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    BRAVO! BRAVO!

    That's right we sweet poetess....inherit her SMILE
    and WEAR IT BOLDLY for everyone to remember
    what a beautiful soul she truly is!
    ears/Seattle great write..proud of you!


  • theprotigy999
    July 4

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    thats so sad , but i love the poem


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    July 4

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    This is beautiful Nicole. I am sure your friend will love this. Written from the heart with deep sorrow. xx

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