Is it actually love that set me free?
Twenty plus years of severe mistrust
Tolerating it all for the Woman who bore
My children and actually made me immortal
A contest entry
- 30 words by Melissa Gayle.
1200 points, ended July 9, 2008, 19 entries
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Very universal expereince you are sharing through the deep words of your impresive poetry my friend..well done...
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Sometimes the heart mends so slowly.
Did love set you free, perhaps in part but more wholely, you are the one who did. -
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Seems like i've been in the cardio unit for a long time., It is very sweeet of you to notice. Much better now, but I still have my moments. Thanks M. :)
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