Was breach born; New Orleans lady,
feeling torn; a life so shady.
Now I live in the Sunshine state,
guess it's time to start a new slate!
The Cajun-Cracker.
Author notes
I made up that name for myself, because I spent half my life in LA and the other half in FL.
"Aunt" for Unstoppable.
A contest entry
- Tiny Ballads by CelticQueen.
1750 points, ended July 20, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ?aka? by 2lullabyhaven.
625 points, ended July 22, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Need An AP Family by Unstoppable.
1200 points, ended August 19, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - AP Nemesis by Umi Juvariel.
600 points, ended February 13, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Ever want to start all over again?
Comments
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Interesting piece. I thought it was funny in it's own little cute way, and I did indeed like it. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.
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Wow, most impactful, thanks for your entry lol
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Great Write
Nice litle ballad you have penned. I like the rhyme. A pleasure to read and it brouht a smile. Best of luck.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Good, but
This doesn't really have anything to do with any of the bands. I have to dq you. Sorry.ALyssa
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Good write
I read it twice just to see and then read your notes I so understand it now .And te username is great
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And such a pretty young lady you have become. I wish you well in all your endeavors and in this challenge.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Does being breach born
explain anything about being a shady New Orleans lady?
This would, I think, qualify as a ballad because it basically tells your life story, doesn't it?
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Nice little piece this one my friend. Explains a lot in so few words too. Keep writing. Good luck in the contest.
Darkness
Reigns
Wayne Leon
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Nice and cute. Cajun Cracker, eh?
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Short and sweet!! and nice use of rhyme. I hope you enjoy your new life!!
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