Scorch fiery freeze
blasted frozen Sun.
Abyss's depths
only known in
Heaven's Light.
Sheer Life!
...on dry grit.
Love
and All Destroyer
one atom's
secret
in a heart of Truth.
A contest entry
- 30 Words II by Dalaney.
600 points, ended July 14, 16 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Welcome any sincere response and critique
Comments
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Wonderful
Great choice of 30 words. So very well done. Congratulations on the honorable mention.
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hehehe
i started lauhging here with this
Sheer Life!
...on dry grit.
i read it as gin
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you say so much and with such power. Thank you. Love, Lane
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Great write here
Trulu the truth of all and yes this is an excellent piece
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Now this is Largeness, my friend! 'Love and All Destroyer', even the most miniscule atom is held in thrall...well done!...You could win in your own contest, and I wish you the best in this one too! Peace always, Rhonda
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most excellent you!! you're getting so bloody good, im hoping my muse will get inspired soon
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WOW! Hey! You're great at these 30 words things!
Fantastic concept, you've written it brilliantly...and am I the first commenter for once? Yay!
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