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Lost Flower Garden Souls

There are no smiles of joyous laughter
comforts repose of natures harmony roads
or souls guiding heart shepherds light
delight of the devil does not exist.

Do not expect weary spirits misguided,
to feel harmony or pleasure of joy
restless sorrows frowns and heartless agonies
of dungeon fields evil darkness keep
where deceptions forever lost souls
the Devil's harvest, will reap

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3. Agony in the smiles of devil's delight.

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  • Desire gold member
    July 6, 2008

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    Magnificent!!

    Powerful piece You have penned my Friend and Excellent message brought forth
    The words: Devil's harvest grabs hard

    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Keep that quill dancing~~
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • penman gold member
    July 6, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • dustookie2
    July 6, 2008

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    Been sitting here long enough guess i should actually comment. Pondering the words and the prompt...the light and the dark. Brilliance in thought and balance. Good luck in this contest.