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The last kiss.

And so we kiss for the last time,
My lips, reluctant to leave yours,
Your hand, on the small of my back
Pulling my body into yours,
Fire races through me,
Setting my heart alight.

And so for the last time,
You pull away,
And leave wanting
Yearning,
Needing,
Just that little bit more.

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Goodbye Angel.

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  • DreamerOfTheStars
    July 16, 2008
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    This is exactly how I felt at my last kiss with my ex it made me want to let my tears fall down but then I'd feel bad and I don't want to but this was truly a work of art...BRAVO
    Love always~ Steph


  • alexandra.
    July 5, 2008
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    It's beautiful.
    Just really, really beautiful.
    And almost makes me want to cry