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How It's Always Been


I’m better off guarding the key to my heart
Than intrepidly handing it off to you
Once upon a time a sincere laugh & smile

Always seemed to be worthwhile 

Denying I care has gotten me nowhere

I've been continually lying to myself

Perfecting benignity hasn't set me free

I'm still trapped in your mind.

[Just one look, just one meaningless stare 

Cheats me into believing that your heart's really there]

 

Go ahead, tell me exactly what I want to hear

So I'll be okay when you decide to disappear

Tell me maybe when you really mean no

...That's how it's always been
Use the slightest touch to break my senses down
So I'll be fine when you're never
 around
Tell me that your actions are all for show

....That's how it's always been.

Test my lies; take me by utter surprise
Persuade me to sway to a familiar song
Your persistant ability to knowingly taunt me
Has driven me to do only [wrong]...
...But I've changed my mind, I'm learning to find

That some things are better left unsaid
But whatever echoes in your eyes; it's still left unread
[Just one glance, just one meaningful stare
Has my heart believing that there's something there
]

 

♥     ♥     ♥    ♥     ♥ 

 

So, come on, tell me exactly what I want to hear

So I'll be okay when you decide to disappear

Tell me maybe when you really mean no

...That's how it's always been
Use the slightest touch to break my senses down
So I'll be fine when you're never
 around
Tell me that your actions are all for show

....That's how it's always been

 

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YoureNoGoodForMe- Manda

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 20, 2008

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    Ouch, very hurtful write, but a necessary one. Great poem, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.


    whisper

  • piccola silver member
    August 20, 2008

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    This is sooooo great. I love the presentation too; the image fits the poetry so well. Lots of emotions too. Love, anger, hurt ... a good mix. Thank you for entering.


  • Kiss the girl--x
    August 6, 2008

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    I lovelovelovelovelove this, it's beautiful
    and kinda sad, but incredibly strong and defiant [=

    finalist [=


  • thepoetsings
    July 13, 2008

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    I would prefer that you use the word "and" rather than an ampersand, but that's really just a personal opinion.

    I enjoyed this, and I think that it's something people can easily identify with - after all, how many people have been in this position?: "Denying I care has gotten me nowhere / I've been continually lying to myself / Perfecting benignity hasn't set me free / I'm still trapped in your mind."

    Just really nice wording throughout for some thoughts I'm pretty sure are universal. Just out of curiosity, are these lyrics? Thanks for sharing


  • she still smiles x gold member
    July 12, 2008

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    Wtff !!!

    Did I seriously NOT freaking comment this betch yet ?!? So sorry hoe -- I must be on ze pipe again;]] You know how that is quite well, if I recall correctedly.

    *Go ahead, tell me exactly what I want to hear
    So I'll be okay when you decide to disappear
    Tell me maybe when you really mean no
    ...That's how it's always been*

    Whoaa definitely my FAVORITE lines by far!!
    God hoe, you are always able to pen EXACTLY how I'm feeling at the moment. How do you do it?!

    *Persuade me to sway to a familiar song*

    I loved the metaphoric imagery in that ...

    *Tell me that your actions are all for show*

    Hahahah I loved that line, too. Ohh, how amazingly ironic that is..it so perfectly describes a certain someone whose name begins with a "b"..need I say more?

    <3333


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    July 8, 2008

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    I loved this such a great masterful piece. Loved the structure of it good luck


  • Fallen-Phases
    July 8, 2008
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    wow! i love it! its beautiful and well written, great job!!


  • Live 4 the Moment
    July 7, 2008

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    I like the very begining of this poem, how it opens up really shows how you wanted to put your heart right out on the table. although its very sad its also very true. people will lead you down so many roads on false signals, so keep writting because I can gurantee you'll go far more places with that!


  • LivinitupCutie
    July 6, 2008

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    I'm really falling behind on your poems..blame July 4th lol...

    this is lose and lose situation for no matter what path you gonna take it's always ended up having a heartbreak..being in denial of everything that's there just to believe that person is always be with you..it's indeed a bittersweet thing..beautifully write as always

    Keep penning!!!
    Lieu


  • Re-invention silver member
    July 5, 2008

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    aww sis.. this is painfully beautiful.. I feel sorry for that guy for IM sure he left a great piece of work .. dont worry hun guys come and go like busses eveyr 5 seconds...
    loved these lines;
    That some things are better left unsaid
    But whatever echoes in your eyes; it's still left unread

    its true I can read eyes very well good luck sis! and great write!


  • Eyes Wide Shut gold member
    July 5, 2008

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    You always write with such emphasis on your words. You make it all scream from the page in beauty. I hope you do well in the contest. I love this poem. (:

    Austyn

    P.S. I love you. hehehehehe.


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 5, 2008

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    Wow this is the best

    I liked this alot. Its very well written and plus i love that picture

    Thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.

    ..

    Shelly


  • xXxOpheliacXxX
    July 5, 2008

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    "Go ahead,tell me exactly what I want to hear so I'll be okay when you decide to disappear" are my favorite lines!! you are so much better than me when it comes to writing your brilliant =D keep it up!!!


  • whispersinthedark
    July 4, 2008
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    You're my new all time favorite poet
    xD


  • whispersinthedark
    July 4, 2008
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    You're my new all time favorite poet.
    xD


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    July 4, 2008
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    you are welcome
    best of luck in the contest


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    July 4, 2008

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    your bg is a very lovely shade of blue, if I do say so myself.

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