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Somnambulant Serenade, Just





eye lids flickering
veins throbbing heart beat
bead of sweat between brow

hypnotized
by darkness
lithe muscles rippling
swaying to dead beat

freedom....
stolen

cloud burst of realization
.
.
.
jarred awake.



Author notes

30 words or less.
no rhyme.
left align.

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    July 9, 2008

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    There is a staccato feel to this, it works for the piece though.

    Interesting idea presented here.