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Empty Inside

Empty Inside

Im empty again
Theres nothing left inside
My heart is broken
A part of me has died
With an aimless life
Im just a hollow void
So i take out my knife
And cut so deep
I watch the blood
As i sit and weep
The pain lets me know
That i am still alive
I will not go
Coz i believe i can survive

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  • PodoPaloma
    July 7

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    I really like this.
    So many people cut. Some because they hate themselves, others because they hate the world - sometimes, both. I think I do it for the same reason you do, well, possibly (sorta)
    "The pain lets me know
    That i am still alive
    I will not go
    Coz i believe i can survive"
    --loved it. loved those last 4 lines!
    There's a lot of pain underneath the words. It's beautiful.
    Sincerely,
    Dovey


  • greyhaime silver member
    July 7

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    welcome to allpoetry

    thanks for sharing this with us here, lots of pain involved, this world is sadly full of it, but as you say in the last line, you can survive.
    cheers
    Grey
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