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Mama Told Me (Etheree)

my
mama
said to me
great life wiil be
if you work real hard
So friend do not be slack
Go at it, with a big whack
Do not falter, stay on right track
No matter what be sure not to bend
and wonders in your life will never end

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  • queenie
    March 24

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    i know mama told you that you are very talented. you have done justce to this form and i truly thank you for entering.


  • penman gold member
    July 6, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. best of luck in the contest.


  • maralisa silver member
    July 5, 2008
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    a poem full of wisdom and true advice good luck in the contest


  • dustookie2
    July 4, 2008
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    I do like how an etheree sits on the page it always presents well. The lines flow and deliver wisdom for living life, one we can all take on board. I am just not sure which option you have selected as your prompt...sorry. Good luck in this contest.