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Blessed Be

Under the moonlight
spells come to life

earth moves in rhythm
fear becomes no more.


All that speak these magic words
come in
perfect love and trust
harmony created


making the impossible
possible

 

Those that seek good things
will be rewarded accordingly


May this be a warning
to all that waver and do harm
"the witching hour" is here.


We stand up
to better the world.

 

Blessed Be

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Prompt - "the witching hour"

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  • Luckintheshadows
    July 7, 2008

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    Oh, what a beautiful write! I love the depth of belief that comes through this poem, a superb take on the prompt, and these lines:
    "May this be a warning
    to all that waver and do harm
    "the witching hour" is here.


    We stand up
    to better the world."

    ^^^ Absolutely fantastic! A great conclusion to the poem.

    Thanks for sharing this, and for taking the time to enter my contest,

    Luck.


  • Tattboyspet
    July 7, 2008

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    if only MORE people would bless the world
    lovely take on the witching hour and understanding the way spells work, etc must be an awesome talent


  • When Darkness Falls
    July 6, 2008
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    great job
    very calm and beautifuly written


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    July 5, 2008

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    ~sigh~
    Something very calm and beautiful flows from this and into my soul


    I leave the page feeling peace and purity

    Best of luck

    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    July 4, 2008
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    Awesome what you did with the prompt.


  • Beret55 silver member
    July 4, 2008
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    mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm you sound like someone i once knew..
    Searching my mind.... Love the poem..

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